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Apple (Filler) by Zylae Apple (Filler) by Zylae
Do you liked being watched? The sensation...the fear...

Do you like the feeling of somebody breathing down your back, whispering to you...

Telling you, that it's all ok....as you get cut open...and your organs run free, and you form a great blood waterfall...

Your arms and legs break off and-...Wtf am I talking about? I've been watching sci-fi horror movies all day, they're going to my head man.
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This apple shall be my new friend that will help me survive the new upcoming terrors that await me tomorrow. And beyond. The description of this fruit being both comforted me and made me feel safe and secure by this fruit. This fruit will perservere all that crosses its path. It will fight. It will win. For, it is apart of the Master Fruit Race, after all. All Hail Apple Being.




I'm kidding, dude. This piece rocks my core! Great rendering! It's very realistic. You could've had the apple have flashing and pulsating veins across itself to signify that something's residing in the fleshy fruity tomb of the fruit. But, other than that, great work!
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I like the recent posts with attempts of realism, but this just isn't very realistic, per say.

Let's start off with the main body of it. It's bump is weird, as apples usually have some type of "hilly" texture (i reccomend just using a cloud), and it doesn't look like there's any gloss on the apple. The texture and unwrapping just doesn't look very good, and i can tell that on a mesh like this it would be tough to unwrap, however you would be better off painting it from scratch or focusing on unwrapping and materials more.

Second, the stem. Looking at an apple stem, it's less of a barky texture and more of just a brown with some detailing at the top. Not only that, the "Perfect curve" does seem a little bit odd.

I like the leaf idea, but it's just "OK". It looks very thick, as if it was a gummy leaf, but with no subsurface scatter (which admittedly is tough, but if it is tough and unknown i reccomend leaving it out of the piece before it becomes distracting.)

However, you can improve SUPER easily.

Go grab an apple, or whatever you're imitating, and keep it in front of you while you model.

Trust me, i've done realism modelling before and having real life reference to work off of is amazing. (In case anyone comes from my page, I did do this on my apple painting goo.gl/LRfTcR)

Not only that, you can use proportional editing to stretch it out and add some disproportionality to it SUPER easily. Trust me, proportional editing is your best friend in something that's very bumpy, and getting a weird bump is tough to do otherwise.

I think you're fine enough to just set the stem to a brown, and if you're brave enough you can paint it yourself.

The leaf is fine, probably put some more research into it before it's in the piece.

I like this, though. It does feel very Scott-ish and amateurish, and maybe that was what you were going for, however, you can still improve.

Nice job.
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LeomRenders Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Apple (fritter)
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FZone96 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Where is the Pen? Where is the Pineapple?
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yoshipower879 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Student General Artist
Ah, that's apples mate
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AngryGal Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017
Bapple xD 
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AndyDatRaginPyro Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Apples
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Pareogo Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
crab apples 
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FredbearsFright Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Student General Artist
o noice apples are yum
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Ferg-E Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YES.
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YingYang48 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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AnimatorRobot Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017
"That's apples mate."
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qasteI-waterfaII Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
apple pen
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sweggle5 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2017
edgy as fuck
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